Q. How do I write subject lines that will make people want to open my email?
A. Internet usability guru Jakob Nielsen says web-users go to great lengths not to read long tracts of text.
He suggests: ‘Avoid teasers that try to entice people to click to find out what the story is about. Users have been burned too often to wait for a page to download unless they have clear expectations of what they will get.
‘In print, curiosity can get people to turn the page or start reading. Online, it’s simply too painful for people to do so.'
With only 40-60 characters – that’s 6-10 words – to put across your message, any subject line needs to get straight to the point.
Sum it up
A good subject line explains what the email is about in terms that appeal to and motivate the reader. It is a micro-version of the email content.
Words to avoid
Avoid words commonly associated with spam emails such as SEX, FREE, ££.
Legal issues
The EU states the sender must identify themselves clearly when sending marketing emails, so make sure you clearly identify yourself in the 'From' field.
Being upfront about who you are keeps you on the right side of the law. If you are cryptic your email is more likely to be treated with suspicion and dismissed as spam.
Good practice
These are some great examples of subject lines that immediately engage the recipients' attention.
Online travel brokers Expedia.com get straight down to it with: Ski holidays from under £170
Apple Computers offers: Priority information exclusively for you from the Apple Store
Egg shouts: Loud & Proud. Your brand new statement from Egg
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